"Arthur Hansen" <arthurh@utah-inter.net> wrote:

Punctuation and grammer was taken into consideration while I'm rewriting
this first part a bit. I was caught up in a creative frenzy the last couple
of days.

Some of us can only wish that would happen to us.... :-)

lungs, quite a breach of etiquette. She even had her shoes on.
Everyone gaped. Soun finally responded tentavely, "Nabiki, what are you
talking about. Please calm down and talk to you father outside."

about?

Good question, isn't it? This is a dangling plot thread at this point.

No, I was only pointing out that 'about' should have had a question mark
after it. (This seems to confuse people every time. ^_^)

I don't have a problem with adding Anime characters to a 'strictly' manga
based continuation. Sasuke really does seem to be a fairly reasonable
character addition.

*muffled gagging sound* No comment. ^_^

Um... "foriegn girl?" Ranma's female form is either Japanese or Chinese
(depending on how you think the curses work), and has never been noted
as looking different than an ordinary Japanese. (Even if you believe in
the anime hair colors, none of the characters have ever noticed them.)

In the dark, at fifty feet? Most peoples first impression will be to assume
that Ranma's female form isn't oriental.

*shrug* I can't imagine why you think this is, but 's your fic.

Thanks for the grammer check. I had forgotten some of my rules since I've
been out of highschool almost ten years, and just recently started to write.
Something I had never been partial to before.

Welcome to the wacky world of fanfic writing. :) Hope your stay is a
pleasant one, and that you supply us with lots of fics. :)


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html