While I didn't follow much of the story, I must say I thoroughly enjoyed it.
It definitely left me with a WAFF by then end, and I'm glad you wrote it. I'll 
have to read the story that caused you to write this one, and I'm also happy to 
see that things are moving along with Crippled, as well as Honor and Love.

Good work Kevin!

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Druid
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Bree Duffy
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