After much thought I've decided to leave the fanfic as it is.  I know 
that the ending is messed up and a few other errors that could be corrected, 
but I'm not up to doing it right now.  I didn't really think about doing 
another revision when I sent it to the list.  I'll be prepared to do that 
for my next fic.
     The major reason I decided to not change the ending is because I can't 
think of anything.  I looked at the suggestions and I was going to take Gary 
Kleppe's one, but decided it wasn't right for me.
     The problem I have with changing the ending is because it was like the 
first thing I planned out--that and the curse thing.  Everything else, I 
thought up so I could go from the beginning(the cursing) to the end.  My 
whole fic was filler.
     I really appreciate the comments though.  I'll be prepared to acutally 
do something with them with my next fic and maybe I'll do a revision on The 
Rip-off in the distant future.


Caine


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