In a message dated 6/24/99 3:47:50 PM Pacific Daylight Time, 
rsekiya@HOTMAIL.COM writes:

Actually, the original plan was just to make Ranma suffer, not force him 
 into marriage.  I mentioned that in passing, but it wasn't completely 
 spelled out.  Ranma never knew that Ukyou placed the curse on him, which 
 means he doesn't know that Ukyou is the one forcing him into it.  It can't 
 be rape if you don't know it's rape.
 
 

	And here is where I have to say something. First sorry for the Spam 
(I believe this is, while still fan fic related more than just a little 
spammish.) and second I know it's a situation that is hard to imagine 
possible but rape is rape even the person raped doesn't realize it. In this 
story I have to say I think Ukyou did rape Ranma but the way it happened I 
don't think_either_ of them realized what it was. Ukyou maybe because of 
denial or not actually taking the time to think about what she was doing and 
Ranma because he didn't know Ukyou had put the rain curse on him.

	To make this a little more relevant I'll say that I agree the ending 
came abruptly but otherwise it was a good fic. To add something new I'll say 
I can see Cologne acting insulted as she did but not having such a reaction 
with the yelling and what not. And before I go since you said you're going to 
add more to the story I'd suggest showing some of Ranma's attempts to get rid 
of the rain. Anyway, that's what I think. Later.


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