I'm craving for feed back!!!!!!!

This is a Clamp fic, a Shishiro and Sabaru fic. All standard disclaimers
apply! None of these people or song belong to me, I only own my imagination
and fantasy!! Enjoy and please give feed
back. This is my first songfic after all..

 Days without cigarettes

  Note: *text* are lyrics
        ~text~ are memories
 
  Shishiro was strolling in a park at dusk, he took a glance at the sun's
position and leapt. He was balanced on the edge of a tall building watching
the sun set. He reached in his coat pocket and took out a packet of
cigarettes. He flipped open the lidand realised that there was only one
left. The corner of his lips
turned up for the tiniest bit of a smile as he lit the last cigarette, a
small wistful smile as he remembers...
 
  ~Shishiro walking out of his apartment to the nearest store to
get a packet of Mild 7. As he was about to reach the store an
eagle's shadow caught his attention. Shishiro's eyes narrowed dangerously
for a split second and he disappeared. ~

 *Days without cigarettes, days without cigarettes
  I'm always not by your side*
 
 ~ Quick footsteps could be heard on the rooftops. It was Shishiro running
on the roofs. He stopped short when he reached a temple.He could sense
something unpleasant going on, something he will not like. He jumped on a
tall tree and started to chant. Within a second the area was inclosed in
another dimension. Shishiro's eyes turned cold, and promised death and
torture upon the scenery.

  Sabaru was hurt lying on the round. Scanning the scene quickly,
Shishiro calculated that Sabaru had put up a good fight and lost
his consciousness just before he arrived. He eyed the attacker with piecing
cold daggers. Without a word he summoned his eagle demon. Before the
attacker had a chance to speak, he was hurt on the ground.~

  *And always in my heart
  Still you are my only hope
  My only bit of hope*
 
  ~ 'Why did you attack him?' glared Shishiro and asked in a cold
monotone that sent shivers down the attacker's back.
'I'm only doing my job=85 don't.. don't kill me, please..' pleaded the
attacker.
'Who told you to attack him?'
'I don't know=85 I have received this money and an attach note that said if
I kill him I'll get a double amount as reward.. a.. no.. please.. please...
help..help!!'
    The background of the created dimension was splashed red, and the
dimension fades away with the dripping colour. Sabaru stirred, Shishiro
quickly put on his mask and attended Sabaru. Sabaru opened his eyes and try
to focus. As soon as he was aware of his situation, he scrambled to his
feet. He looked at Shishiro at surprised and blurted out a bunch of
questions and concern.
Shishiro assured him and ushered him home. Shishiro reached into
his pocket absent mindly and pulled out his empty cigarette box.
He then remembers it was empty and put it in the nearby rubbish
bin. Sabaru noticed his action and asked,
'Have you finished another packet again?'
Shishiro chuckled lightly and answered, 'is was an old packet
Sabaru-kun.' ~
 
  *Its dark cannot walk on till dawn
  My yearning strip by strip built on
  That beginning junction of the little grey town
  You seem not to like it when no soaring blue doves Ah~~*
 
 ~ Sabaru smiled gently and suddenly it starts to rain. They ran
to the nearest store for shelter. As they stepped in the
supermarket, they noticed the time, 5:30. They looked at each other and the
trolleys next to them. They took one out and started to shop for their
dinner. As they walked down the last isle to the cashier, Sabaru noticed
that Shishiro glanced at the cigarettes on the shelves and walked on. Sabaru
took a packet of Mild 7 and put it in the trolley for him. ~

  *Without a cigarette in hand then light a match
   Smoke away your dispair
   Smoke away that showers that will never come back O~~*
 
  Shishiro took one last smoke and dropped it off the building. He watched
the stub fall down the edge quietly leaving a trail of
smoke behind...
 
 ~ When they stepped out of the supermarket, the rain had softened to
drizzle. They each took a bag of shopping and walked the way to Shishiro's
home. After they had their dinner, Sabaru stood up and collected his
belongings and took his leave. Before he left the apartment, he took the
packet of cigarettes out of the shopping and silently put it on the low
table in the entrance unnoticed. Shishiro walked him to the lift and went
back in when the door slid shut. He caught sight of the cigarettes and
walked to the windows and looked down. He then saw Sabaru stepping out of
the building. He opened the packet and lit a cigarette. He inhaled deeply
and stared at the night sky long time, till dawn broke...~
 
  *When you remember me*
 
Taking one last lingering look at the dimming sky, Shishiro took
flight. To catch a glimpse of his Sabaru-kun before the final battle.
 
  *The days still without cigarettes*
 
  ~owari~
 
 Kaz
 http://Kaz-chan@cutezone.com




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