Subject: Re: [FFML] [C&C] Review June 19
From: Razorclaw X
Date: 6/20/1999, 12:17 AM
To: rgorman@telusplanet.net
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

Subject:
        [FFML][Ranma]Nemesis, 3.4: Death of the Great Tiger
  Date:
        Fri, 18 Jun 1999 19:06:24 PDT
  From:
        Razorclaw X <spiceoflife@HOTMAIL.COM>

Description:  Another fight in an ongoing battle against
a cult of looney super martial artists.

  Hey, you called it that.

Comments:  Given that this series has been going on for
quite a while, a paragraph or two bringing the readers up
to speed would be a good idea.  The Gosunkugi scene seems
like a pointless intrusion.  He's gone.  Let it go.

  To tell the truth, I've been posting fractions of a really, REALLY large 
fic, and no such summaries exist. If you so ask, I'll try it next time.
  Yes, Gos is pointless. I felt like writing a stab on the guy under the 
bridge, though....

"Nekohanten"

  Yes, I've known that for quite a while, and I thought I avoided using the 
word in the fic. I've noticed quite a while ago that I've BEEN spelling it 
wrong, and I've been doing it for consistency's sake. But in this one I've 
tried not to refer to the restaurant by name. Oops.

"Wellbeing" is one word.

  Not according to my dictionary (although I checked, and it IS a hyphenated 
word).

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