OK, got 3 chapters that I've got C&C on.

Wild Bood V2.3.3

Looks good overall, but personally, i try to keep extranious things out of 
fic's I write.  If its not moving the plot forward, it gets cut.  These last 
couple of chapters have been interesting, but I keep wondering what they have 
to do with the overall plot.  There are also a couple of spelling errors 
still in there here and there, bad enough that even I noticed them.

Girl Days 10:

Nice of you to give the readers a chance to catch their breath.  Again, this 
chapter doesnt go much of anywhere at this point, though clearly it IS 
setting things up for more mayhem in the very near future.  Personally, I'm 
wondering what these costume ideas are...

Different Viewpoint: American Vacation

yet another well worked chapter by the Olsen's, though I believe I've 
mentioned that I felt that the pace in getting into the main plot was a 
little slow in the past.  Only one nitpick...  Given the sort of work Kermit 
did in getting the files, I'm surprised that he didnt run the fingerprints 
associated with the Passports as well.  Cause the way I see it, he would 
have, and should have noticed that Ranma & Ranko have the exact same 
fingerprints, which should also have them scratching their heads.  Also, I'm 
surprised that the Old one didn't seem to know about Jusenkyo, that old guy 
seemed to know everything, without having to look it up.  And often knew what 
you were going to ask before you did.  Didnt get that impression here.  
Bluntly put, Jusenkyo has been there for a very long time, it doenst feel 
right to me that the Shao-Lin didn't know about it.