Subject: Re: [FFML] [FF] [BGC/ICZ] Heart and Soul: Iczer in a Bubble
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 6/17/1999, 5:41 PM
To: "Nikholas F. Toledo Zu" <niftol@i-manila.com.ph>
CC: <ffml@fanfic.com>

Hmm. Seems Iczer fics are getting a sudden resurgence. (A good thing)

As to the fic itself. Pretty good overall. I pretty much had an idea it
would be Nene Iczer-2 would end up having contact with, but it made sense
in a way. The story itself flowed well, with only a couple of grammar
mistakes here and there. The only minor nit I had was with the speed with
which Largo took over just about everything and the damage it caused. It
seemed a little rushed and was just too mosterously huge. One minute
things are okay, and the next suddenly everything is in ruins. Though the
KS's final fight with Largo worked as a climax, even with Iczer-2 having
to make the save.

Overall, a good read.

D.B. Sommer