Subject: [ffml] [lemon] [ranma] "Gratuity" Pt. 1 (1 of 2)
From: fcasper
Date: 6/16/1999, 3:14 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

Ranma 1/2: Gratuity
A Ranma 1/2 Lemon
by Michael Chen (Zenki) and Megane 6.7
michael.h.chen@yale.edu
fcasper@yesic.com

Authors' Notes
Megane 6.7 was of great help in the production of this fic.  In
fact, he had produced a great deal of ideas for me and elaborated
on my initial plans for this story.  Of course, original idea of
the story is mine, but many of the sex scenes here are of
Megane's doing.  Thus, he is a co-author.

Warning
This fic is a lemon fic, which means that intense sexual
situations soon follow.  In fact, kids, do not read this. 
Members of the Christian Coalition, don't read this.  Old people
over 50 years of age, don't read this.  Heck, this list of people
who shouldn't read this can go on and on.  The most important
part is that if you think you might be offended by sexual scenes
and such, then don't even bother reading.  It's guaranteed that
you will flame us.

But if you are a lemon aficionado, prepare for pure enjoyment as
you read.  Unlike the stories of alt.sex.stories, this fanfic
actually has a plot instead of the "How many times can the
protagonist have his surgically enhanced p***s spray semen within
a short period of time."  We have taken great pains to add humor
to a story that can be called, "Akane and Ranma get Nerima Down
on Them," so you will on occasion laugh your brains out when your
hand gets tired (Heh heh, I was just joking about the hand...) 
Oh yeah, we have checked the archives of rec.arts.anime.creative,
and we the authors are proud that we will be establishing many
firsts with this fanfic.

Information used in this story was obtained in Principles of
Physiology by Totora, 8th edition.  A truly nice entry level
Anatomy and Physiology text.  They do have a little section on
human reproduction...


Round 1

    It was the next day, right after school was dismissed, and
Akane was already having thoughts of defeat.  All that she could
think of was the truth to Ranma's claims.  As a girl, she had
bigger breasts, as Nabiki once claimed.  Even though she was
truly a guy, she was a lot better at feminine things.  Ranma sure
knew how to cook well.  Hell, almost every boy in Nerima knew
about Ranma's true nature, but that didn't prevent them from
ogling her when she was in a sexy, tight, two piece swimsuit.

    Such thoughts occupied Akane as she slowly walked home on the
sidewalk, slouched down, her self esteem deflating like a poorly
tied condom.  It seemed that whenever she thought about her
fiancee, she immediately thought about his insults.  She was
beginning to believe him.

    Looking up at the sun, which was just beginning it's
downwards trip in the sky, she whispered to no one in particular. 
"Maybe I'm a tomboy after all."

    "Excuse me," a weary voice spoke.  Without even looking at
the person, Akane got the impression that he must have traveled a
far distance.  "Excuse me ma'am, but do you know where is this
city?"

    Akane was a nice girl, and she turned to give the polite
stranger directions.  The wind blew into her eyes and she blinked
as she turned.  When her eyes opened, she saw an extremely red
Ryoga Hibiki, cringed backwards.  "Akane!  What are you doing in
Taiwan?"

    It was Ryoga Hibiki, a good, loyal, reliable friend.  Someone
who was everything that Ranma wasn't.  He was polite, mature, and
not quick to anger.  Akane smiled as she looked at her long lost
friend.  "It's been a while, Ryoga.  And, you're in Nerima,
Japan.  This isn't even close to Taiwan."

    Ryoga muttered a curse, and reaching into his pocket he
pulled out a worn map, creased up so much that it was beginning
to fray out at the corners.  "I could swear that according to
this map, this is Taiwan!"

    "Let me see it...."  Akane said as she took a look at the map, her
body unintentionally brushing past Ryoga's arm.  Ryoga's face became
cute as he started to laugh nervously while giving Akane a
strange stare.  She didn't notice as she was focusing hard on the
map, trying to make out the worn out lettering.  After some
extreme effort, she was able to determine that the map was really
a map of Oniboshi, wherever that was.

    She started laughing.  "Ryoga, this place isn't even in Japan!  This
is not going to be helpful here at all."  She gave Ryoga a
friendly pat on the shoulder, and noticed a cloud of dust rise as
her hand hit his shoulder.  "God, you're a mess.  Why don't you
stop by my place?  You can have a shower and a quick bath. 
You're probably tired from all your traveling."

    Ryoga's face turned blissful and he whispered.  "You want me
to come in your home?"

    Akane shot Ryoga a weird look.  "Yeah."  She blinked a few
times as Ryoga's face filled with unexplainable joy.  She grabbed
his hand and walked briskly, pulling him along.

* * *

    Akane and Ryoga walked into the Tendo Dojo.  It was strangely
quiet, and the two stood in the foyer feeling the strangeness
stab them.  The Dojo was rarely quiet.  Hell, with Ranma along,
nothing was ever normal.  Akane called out.  "Kasumi?  Nabiki? 
Father?"

    That produced results, as the kitchen door opened, and out
walked Kasumi carrying a basket.  She paused to take off her
apron and make last adjustments to her hair.  "Oh hi Akane,
you're finally home.  Father went out with Mr. Saotome.  Ranma
hasn't returned yet.  Nabiki went to her friend's house.  And I
have to go to run an errand."

    Akane seemed surprised as she replied.  "Ok, Kasumi."

    Kasumi smiled.  "Don't worry, I'll be back in time to make
dinner."  She grabbed her shoes and carefully put them on, and
was out the door.

    Akane sighed and stretched her arms out, when she realized
that she had forgotten about Ryoga.  "Oh, I'm so sorry, Ryoga.  I
bet you can't wait for a bath."  She grabbed his hand and led him
to the bathroom.  "Ok Ryoga, I'll be in my room.  If you need
help, just call."

    Ryoga nodded and he walked into the bathroom, closing the
door behind him.  Akane hearing the shower turn on, walked
upstairs to her room to drop off her heavy books.  Without anyone
to disrupt her thinking, she immediately thought about how
foolish she was.

    Leaning back in her chair, she stared at the ceiling.  "How
could I be so stupid to make this dumb bet?"  Akane sighed.  "And
how am I going to find someone to have sex?"

    As if on cue, or by some magical mechanism, she heard a shout
from downstairs.  "Um Akane!  How do I get out of the bathroom?"  

    Mindlessly, Akane quickly ran downstairs to the bathroom, and
without much thought she pulled open the door and walked in. 
Ryoga almost screamed and he covered himself quickly with his
towel.  Akane blushed profusely while apologizing.  "Oh I'm so sorry,
Ryoga!  I should have knocked!"

    Ryoga, his face beet red, muttered.  "It's not a problem at
all."  Then his face lit up as he took something off his neck and
handed it to Akane.  It was a tiny medallion.  "I almost forgot!  I
wanted to give this to you.  This is something I found during my travels
and I thought you would like it."  Akane looked at the tiny but
beautiful gem glimmering in the sunlight that filtered in through the
window and steam.

    She seemed surprised.  "It's so nice of you."  Akane carefully
placed the necklace into her pocket and she instinctively gave Ryoga a
hug.  "Thank you, Ryouga!"  

	Ryouga froze in place as he felt her arms wrap around him.  A look of
pure bliss swept over his face as he lost himself in joy.  Meanwhile,
Akane found herself frozen as well.  She hadn't meant to hug him when he
was only clad in a towel but now that she had, a revelation dawned on
her.  She saw her chance to grab an early lead in the contest.

    But then again, her emotions were telling her otherwise. 
First of all, she was good friends with Ryoga, and she didn't
want to do anything to ruin their friendship.  Ryoga was a true
friend, someone willing to go out and help her, no matter the
situation.  But instinct and physical attraction was quickly beating
back her emotions and rationality, she felt the warm water on Ryoga's
chest soak through her school uniform.  

    Akane looked at Ryoga, and found him whimpering something, as
if delirious with joy.  Could it be he wanted her too?  She took a deep
breath and using her pride, shoved her sensibilities to the side for a
moment.  Making a silent apology to Ryoga, she whispered to him. 
"Ryoga, do you think I'm attractive?"

	Ryouga seemed to be unable to speak as he slowly nodded.  Akane noted
this and then decided to test him further.  Taking a deep breath, she
deliberately pressed herself against him, lightly running a finger along
one of his arms.  A few moments later, her suspicions were confirmed
when she felt something hard pressing against her thigh.  She looked
into Ryouga's eyes and smiled as she now knew for certain he was
interested.	

    "Will you make love to me?"

    Ryoga heard what Akane asked him loud and clear.  His legs
went weak and he buckled down, his hands lost their grip allowing
all that shielded him from Akane to drop to the floor.  She
grabbed the sides of his face, and then kissed him.

    He felt Akane's sweet firm lips press against his and he felt
his strength slowly return.

    Then without a word, the two rushed to Akane's bedroom. 
Closing the door behind her, Akane led Ryoga to her bed, where
she teased him.  Sitting down, Ryoga watched Akane slowly unbutton her
dress, one button at a time, her hands steady, careful.

    The slowness itself served to excite Ryoga even further and
his already stiff erection stretched itself to it's outer limits. 
Akane smiled angelically as she pulled her dress up, revealing
her white bra and panties.

    She wiggled seductively, and she kissed Ryoga, pushing him
back on to the bed.  Then against his body, she slid off her last
remaining garments, allowing unadulterated flesh touch his.

    Ryoga whispered.  "Akane, I...  I..."  She silenced him with
a kiss.

    "Don't worry, just do what you feel."  Akane spread her legs
slightly and she could feel Ryoga's hardness against her belly. 
Teasing him, she moved up and down, brushing her lithe stomach
against Ryoga.

    He closed his eyes and lost his breath, whispering her name. 
Akane looked at Ryoga for a second, having her last doubts.  Then she
thought about Ranma and what he could be doing with whom right now. 
This had the effect of making her bold.  

    Bringing her lips against Ryoga, she kissed a path from his
navel, up his chest, accentuated with flowing muscles, to his
slim neck, and finally reaching his lips.  She pressed her body
against him.

    If Ryoga felt good earlier, right now he was lost in a place
better than heaven.  He felt Akane kissing him intensely, not
afraid to use her tongue.  She pulled away from Ryoga, and gave
him a reassuring smile.  She cradled his head into her bosom,
allowing him to kiss her chest.

    Not a single area was left untouched as Ryoga kissed away,
enjoying Akane's creamy skin.  As Ryoga teased Akane, she could
feel herself growing excited with each passing moment.  As Ryoga
nursed on her stiff nipples, Akane wanted release, she wanted
Ryoga.

    Reaching down, Akane lined Ryoga up straight and pushed down
hard.

    She felt a brief shock of pain as something tore within her. 
Ryoga watched Akane wince and cry out slightly in pain.  He
gently ran her hand across her cheek.  "Akane, are you all right? 
Did I hurt you?"  She saw the guilt on his face, and she forced
out a smile.

    "No, just wait a bit."  Akane sat there, held still against
Ryoga, waiting for the pain of losing her virginity to pass.

    A few minutes passed, and Akane felt ready to act.  Sliding
up and down slowly, as if taking her first sip of sex, Akane
found that it was easy.

    As she slid up and down, she felt a feeling quickly wash over
her.  She leaned forwards to give Ryoga another kiss.  They two
gave each other reassuring glances as they explored.

    After an hour, Akane felt the delirium of sex take over
and she closed her eyes to savor the sensations.  Ryoga on the
other hand opened his eyes, watching Akane cry out in passion,
her breasts heaving, trembling, tense as she sucked air into her
lungs.

    Under such treatment, neither of them could last long, their
hot, wet bodies trembling and spasming.  Then Akane let out a
final scream of passion as she felt Ryoga lose it.

    As Akane felt her muscles give and rested on Ryoga, she
thought to herself.  'I might actually enjoy this bet with
Ranma.'

    Their hearts pounding so hard that they could hear it, Ryoga
and Akane laid there motionless, waiting for their climax to
subside.  Ryoga whispered.  "Akane, that was the best thing that
ever happened to me."  He kissed the top of her head and played
with her hair.

    Akane whispered back.  "Yeah, me too."


To be continued in Round 1 (2 of 2) on Friday.

C&C is very welcome.  :)

michael.h.chen@yale.edu
fcasper@yesic.com