Subject: Re: [FFML] [C&C] Review June 14
From: Alan Harnum
Date: 6/15/1999, 9:06 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

At 12:28 AM 6/15/99 -0600, David Johnston wrote:
Subject: 
       [FFML] [Ranma][Fanfic] Waterfalls - Chapter Two 
 Date: 
       Mon, 14 Jun 1999 23:29:19 -0400 
 From: 
       Alan Harnum <harnums@thekeep.org>

Description:  Supernaturally evil woman with a fly
motif is taking over minds for some reason.  

Hmm.  Short and concise summary.  :)

Comments:  Exceptionally good.  I take it the problem with
Taro is that he's strong willed enough that she can't
control him well?

Maybe, maybe not.  It's a mystery.  :)

Ciao,
-Alan Harnum