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From: Michael A. Chase <mchase@ix.netcom.com>
To: David A. Tatum <desaix@sysnet.net>

She sighed.  "If you're the best chance these people have at getting
together, what's the worst?"  Shaking her head, she turned her

attention

to

the hallway.  "Keiichi-san!" the girl called.  "Tadaima!"

That sounds more like Urd than Belldandy, though picking up a total

gaijin

in the middle of Tokyo might be a bit stressful to her.

I had one particular point in mind, from the manga, when I wrote that
scene- it's very shortly after Urd was introduced (maybe even the comic
WHERE she was introduced).  Urd walks in just as Belldandy's moving in to
kiss Keiichi, and Bell looks skyward as if she were wondering what else
could go wrong...

Bell's a bit different in the manga than the anime... more expressive, for
one thing.  Much quicker to anger, a little less patient with her
sisters... and perhaps a little more forward with Keiichi.  I haven't seen
all the manga, obviously, but I'm trying to keep her in character with what
I've got...
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