TJ Hamilton <ryougaecho@abraxis.com> wrote:

        "Because the hot water canceled your wish. I got sent right back
here."

'cancelled wishes?' )_)

hmmmmm

For anyone who might have come in late, any wishes Ranma fulfills are
undone when he goes back to uncursed form.

        Rain poured down onto already-drenched bodies. Ranma transformed
again. Akane screamed.

Maybe some mention of 'quaking rage?'

That's good... I'll see about working it in somewhere.

        Yuka picked up a baseball bat and swung it. It stopped abruptly
in midair with a ringing thud. A voice from nowhere cried out,
"YEEEEEOWTCH!"

ringing? if it rings, you may wanna mention 'aluminum'. . .unless wood
rings now. . .

Nah, it's wood... will change the description. One of the biggest
difficulties I had in writing this chapter was the sound effects. I
mean, what does a person getting hit on the head with a baseball bat
sound like? For obvious reasons, I didn't want to experiment and find
out. ^_^

what else have you got up your sleeve for this one?

I guess i'll have ta wait to find out.

Heh heh heh. Just wait and see. Now that the pieces are finally all in
place....

Thanks for the comments!


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html