"Because the hot water canceled your wish. I got sent right back
here."

'cancelled wishes?' )_)

hmmmmm

        Rain poured down onto already-drenched bodies. Ranma transformed
again. Akane screamed.

Maybe some mention of 'quaking rage?'
 

        Yuka picked up a baseball bat and swung it. It stopped abruptly
in midair with a ringing thud. A voice from nowhere cried out,
"YEEEEEOWTCH!"

ringing? if it rings, you may wanna mention 'aluminum'. . .unless wood
rings now. . .

what else have you got up your sleeve for this one?

I guess i'll have ta wait to find out.

-tj
-CSY head
-FFIRC head