Quite an interesting look at the after effects of the last story arc. I
agree with Gary on Akari. Surprising that Ryoga has no thoughts on the
pig loving girl seeing as how he went to look for her after the manga.
Would like to see where all this is leading up to.
Somethings I noticed:
TJ Hamilton wrote:
Part Two
(Something happened to set this off. She's to old to be trying to draw
concepts like this,) cologne decided.
She's <too> old to be trying *Spelling*
like this,) <Cologne> decided *Capitalize*
(I had forgotten all about that,) Shampoo though sadly. (I just wanted
to. . .hurt her for making fun of me. . .)
Shampoo <thought> sadly. *Spelling*