Li Sheng wrote:

Author: ah... ok. Here is the party for the adventure, did you like it?

Well, as a setup for a story, it's pretty unbalanced.  As humor, it
needs more jokes . . .

if you have any ideas or someone you think would be a better member of
the part please tell me. Do you want a story to be written? 

Not as it stands, no.  However it might be entertaining to take bit
players and losers from various anime series and make a party of
low-level adventurers from them.  Instead of Lina Inverse, for example,
make Hikaru Gosunkugi your mage.  Sailor Moon, likewise, is too
powerful.  Chibi-usa--is also too powerful.  Yuuchiro is about right. 
Make him a Paladin.

-- David