On Mon, 7 Jun 1999 Kenjiko2@aol.com wrote:


@>	(Guess.)

No. So there.

@> to the lower stratosphere or the koi pond again.  After the usual
@> argument, they would go to school. 

I would change that to 'a flight though the lower stratosphere'. He
doesn't stay there for long enough for it to qualify as a real
destination. :)

@>	"Gotta agree, Sham-chan, Ranchan's beating us all out in the
@> kawaii competition... especially when she turns it on."

Gah. I hate that nickname. But I sorta guess it's the kind of thing
that Ukyou would say, hmm? 


@>	"That I am both a man and a woman.  That I'm both.  And that

'That I'm both,' is somewhat needlessly repetitive, I think.

@> it's not so bad to be both.  I... I kinda like dressing pretty
@> sometimes, and I kinda like it that if I gotta be a girl I'm a GOOD
@> looking girl, and... well, I guess maybe I AM both a boy and a girl,
@> sort of."

I'm not sure that Ranma could have such a change of heart so quickly
about dressing pretty. But then, I haven't spent a month and a half as
a girl.


@>	"Bet's that he joins the Shampoo fan club?" asked Hiroshi.

Bets.

@>	School ended, as it usually did.  After a short delay caused

It doesn't end sometimes? :)


@>	The panda sat playing listlessly with a tire.  DAMNED if he
@> was going to respond.  Stupid woman, making his son a daughter. 

<snicker>

@>	"What can THAT be?" wondered Nabiki, who wasn't used to not
@> knowing ANYTHING. 

'Anything' should be changed to 'Everything'. As it stands right now,
it sounds like Nabiki isn't used to knowing nothing. Which is true,
I'm sure, but not really what you meant. I think. :)

@>	"Well... the fabric, yeah.  Can't deny it.  When I'm a girl
@> things just tend to feel, well, better.  Some things anyhow.  Then
@> again, I don't have quite the threshold for pain that I do when I'm a
@> boy.  It's a funny thing, really." 

Theoretically, women have a higher threshold for pain. But it's hard
to compare. Nobody's ever spent time as both (genetically).

@> her masculinity and this time she was trying to be a girl.  Or maybe
@> it was because she was just way too pissed then.

This makes it sound like she was drunk at the time. At least, to me. :)


@>	"My pony-tailed-- no, my fire haired-- no, my-- you know,
@> 'twould be kind of you to stick to a single hairstyle, my love, that I
@> might sing your praises better." 

Kuno? At a loss for words? Will wonders never cease? :)

@>	"Same here, Nabiki.  Kuno's picture is in the dictionary next
@> to the word baka.  I for one don't fell like being harassed by him or

...next to the word 'baka'.

@>	And BOY, is part eleven going to be a hoot! ^_^  

Hurry up with it, already. I've been waiting...oh, an hour or
so. C'mon! Chop chop!

Jan

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