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From: <Kenjiko2@aol.com>
To: <ffml@fanfic.com>
Sent: Sunday, June 06, 1999 22:11
Subject: [FFML][Ranma] Girl Days part ten (draft)

"Yeah... Very Tragic Story of Furinkan High School Girls Uniform that

drown in spring {fifteen hundred years : one thousand five hundred year}
ago..."

The Ranma-chan Preservation Society was composed of a group of girls that

not only liked, but actually idolized the "new" Ranma.  They spent a lot of
time and effort wishing they could be as strong and skilled as her, trying
to figure out ways to convince her to stay a girl full time, and reading
texts on martial arts.  Some had even joined local dojos.  (There was much
disappointment when it was learned that the Tendo Dojo wasn't taking
students {at the time :}.)

And then there was the really strange one-- a small, and {secretive :

exclusive} club,
and the only one that Ranma approved of.  The Helpers.

Not the Ranma Happiness Protection League (RHPL)?  I can't see it as
secretive since they eat lunch together most days.

"Same here, Nabiki.  Kuno's picture is in the dictionary next to the word

baka.  I for one don't {fell : feel} like being harassed by him or his
sister."

And BOY, is part eleven going to be a hoot! ^_^

I suspect everyone (except possibly Ukyou) will show up as Sailor Moon and
she'll be Tuxedo Kamen.  Cologne would be amused.

This part was relatively slow.  That's not a complaint, you needed to lay
the foundation for the next part.  It was also nice to see more of how
things are going at school.