Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic][Tenchi] Mirai Muyo! Chapter 3: Girls. Girls, Girls
From: Chris Davies
Date: 6/5/1999, 12:04 AM
To: Christopher Angel
CC: ffml@fanfic.com


I would _really_ recommend going to my (admittedly out of date) web page and
reading the first two chapters of this again.

	Laughing at recommendations, Chris proceeds undaunted.

"Hououji Fuu, Ryuuzaki Umi, Shidou Hikaru.  The recently-renamed Girl's
Combat Club, and in our class.  You should know this, stupid, you dated Umi
once," the short, pudgy teen helpfully supplied, and then chuckled.  "I SO
prefered their old name.  'F-cubed' just had a ring to it."

Kuroguma blinked a few times, and then snickered as the pun dawned on him.
"Kanshiki, you're a hentai."

	Since that title was given by the American translators to an anime
called "The Adventures of a Perfectly Healthy Eighteen Year-Old Girl" in
the original, I don't think he'd get the pun.

"Since when are you an authority on men?  You don't even have a boyfriend."

Umi sniffed delicately.  "That's because they're all immature little
idiots."

	Plus we all know who she's really after. <grin>

"Neither is Lantis-kun," Hikaru added.

	Nn.  Don't think so.  I think she'd just go for no-suffix when it
came to him.  (Pity it's the anime version, or she could say "Or Eagle!"
and get a Look.)

"Ryoko and I had very little to do with each other," Tenchi responded
evenly.  "She spent her day with her new friends."  He turned and went back
to his desk, shaking his head.  "Please, Ayeka.  I just wanted a nice, calm,
senior year in school, without all the insanity that happens around here.
Ryoko seems to want the same thing, and I'm giving her the benefit of the
doubt until she proves me wrong.  I can't stop you, Ayeka, but I'm asking
you: PLEASE don't make trouble."  He picked up his pencil and began working
on his homework.  "I've got to finish these problems. Goodnight, Ayeka,
Sasami.  Please close the door on your way out."

	<beat> "Who are you, back-boned one, and what have you done with
Masaki Tenchi?!?"

	Nice work!

Chris Davies.