Wow!  Someone other than myself wrote an Iczer fanfic!  Never would have
predicted that!  Sorry I haven't gotten around to commenting on it until
now, but I've had to spend most of my time writing essays for university.

Overall, a good story, if a bit heavy on the WAFF.  I do realise that the
story was intended to be WAFFy, but I still think you overloaded on the
sugar in a couple of places (such as the baby scene).  The only other minor
problem I had was that I don't think Iczer-2 would be as ignorant about
humanity as you portrayed her as being (she pretty definitely knows about
the Kthulhu/Cthuwulf, whom I presume are very similar to humans).  These
aren't major complaints, though.  Here's hoping you write more Iczer fanfic!
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Andrew Dynon

My 10 Favourite anime (in no particular order): 
The Iczer Series / Teknoman / Magic Knight Rayearth / Martian Successor
Nadesico / Rurouni Kenshin / Sailor Moon /	Card Captor Sakura / Brain Powerd /
Neon Genesis Evangelion / Gundam Wing


"Stories have to be told to exist.  They exist in the telling and retelling."
- Itzhak Roeh