Hello Robert Geiger.

Although it was slightly confusing at times. I liked this fanfic for 
many reasons.

Reason One: You used the AD Police Manga.

Reason Two: You brought back Bu-89-C-E. The Boomer that died in the AD 
Police Manga. I liked that character.

Reason Three: Jeena Malso is in this fanfic.

Reason Four: This fanfic did not main focus on the Knight Sabers point 
of view.

Reason Five: It was mainly from the Boomer's point of view.

Reason Six: You did not portray the AD Police as just canon fodder.

Reason Seven: You used the Blade Runner reference (in-joke) 'retired'.

But I do have some questions concerning this fanfic.

Why did you change your font midway though your fanfic? This was the 
main annoyness I had when I read your fanfic.

Where was Jeena doing at the AD Police between 2028-2032? This needs to

be explained ferther.

Who is Negako? This needs to be explain ferther.

Where is Daley Wong?

And, I had a problem at the end of this fanfic. When the Jack 
reveiled to Jenna the he was a boomer. Also, Jeena accepts Jack as a 
boomer. When she affers Jack her hand in a handshake. I found that 
entire scene to be a little fast for my tastes. That scene needs to be 
worked on.

Finally, I hope Chapter 2 comes out soon.

Well bye.






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Paul Cousins' at paul_cousins@yahoo.com
A Fan Of The True Under Dogs Of MegaTokyo.
The AD Police. And A Blade Runner Fanatic. 




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