At 03:49 PM 6/01/99 -0600, David Johnston wrote:

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Subject: 
       [FFML][Ranma]Girl Days, Part Eight (draft) 
 Date: 
       Thu, 27 May 1999 21:22:44 EDT 
 From: 
       Kenjiko2@aol.com

Description:  Ranma explores the wonders of womanhood.

Comments:  Very wacky, highly recommended.  

It's been what, four days, and I'm still laughing.

Subject: 
       [FFML] [Ranma] "A Little Earlier" part 6 
 Date: 
       Sat, 29 May 1999 17:13:09 -0400 
 From: 
       Stephen Ratliff <sratliff@runet.edu>

Description:  Ranma and Akane, having met at age twelve,
rather than being the textbook cases of retarded sexual
development that we know, have instead become a smidgeon
precocious.  

smidgeon... haven't heard that word in a while.  And I'm 
afraid it will soon be too mild of a word.

Comments:  While Nodoka would probably be proud of her
son's manliness, she might not approve of Akane's lack
of resistance to his wiles.

hmmm, that's a good point.  You've just solved a case of writer's 
block.

Thanks for the comments.  I have to say that your insights
have helped me with this story.  Together with Gary Kleppe, 
you are the core of the feedback on the FFML.

Stephen

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