David Johnston wrote:

Subject:
        [FFML][SMJ][Fanfic]Plasma Ghost
  Date:
        Fri, 28 May 1999 08:12:26 +1000
  From:
        Phil <kagami@jeack.com.au>

Description:  A pseudo-scientifically explained ghost
relates a series of glimpses he had of the events of
Sabre Marionettes.

SMJ is mostly pseudo-scientifically based; the ghosts fit in quite wellin that
respect - sadly, the story does come across as a series of
glimpses without the OVA 6 context. I'll see what I can do to improve
that aspect.

Comments:  Interesting glimpse of a series I know nothing
of, but not really a story.

I'm currently thinking about a rewrite - keeping the ghost POV
but adding more story elements - but other more conventional
style stories will hopefully appear first.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Phil the Magic Mirror.