Gary,

     Just got finished reading your 'fic, "I Dream Of Ranma". I will
probably be making one or more of the same comments that other people have
already made, due to the fact that I don't read other peoples C&C before I
actually read the 'fic myself. The only ral problem I have with this 'fic,
is that the wishing should not work for everybody that makes one. If you
are patterning this fiction after the 60's sitcom, Ranma should have ONE
master and the wishes should be permenent. Otherwise, the wish formula can
work anyway you like. But, personally I think Ranma should have more
control on who wishes for what. You might even throw in a little,
"Wishmaster", for flavor. Please do not take my comments the wrong way, I
liked the 'fic, I just think the wishing should be improved on.

Ja Matta!

Chris