Thanks to those that C&C's the prologue 
and first three chapters. I have corrected
the spelling and some of the glaring errors,
as well as provided notes on certain things
that were questioned, such as what a
'zaibatsu' is. For those that don't know, a
zaibatsu is a massive, multinational corporation
such as Sony, or Coca-cola. The updated versions
can be found on:
http://members.tripod.com/~Valandar/fanfic.html

Thanks again, chapter 4 should be out either
today, or the middle of next week.

- Valandar the Red of the Empty Tankard

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