Hello, I have finally began my first full Ranma fic.  This is spanned from a 
challenge that was given to me from a friend; that deals with someone 
besides Ranma and Mousse going after Shampoo for a reason that can't be 
determined in the first chapter.  And be completely unpredictable in the 
end.  This is the opening chapter that explains the character that I have to 
accomadate the challenge, whom is trying to find Shampoo.  It helps if 
you've seen the "Two Too Violent Girls" episode of Ranma 1/2, so that you 
know whom Ling-Ling and Lum-Lum are.  Just in case you haven't, they are two 
of Shampoo's Amazon sisteren.  They paid Ranma a visit in the before 
mentioned episode.  I hope you like the opener, and if you want to take a 
shot at whom the character that is after Shampoo; please be my guest.  Oh 
yeah, as always: C&C's are welcome and appreciated, as long as they don't 
have dynamite tied to them.


Ranma 1/2 and everything in it belongs to Viz Video.  This fic, a bad case 
of 5 o'clock shadow, and two really bad dubbed tapes of DBZ belong to me.


2 in 1 Combo...



The scene looked as if a war had been fought.  The tattered and bruised 
bodies of almost an entire Amazon Tribe lay on the ground as only three 
fighters remained standing.  Ling-Ling and Lum-Lum stood side by side as 
they faced their attacker.  He had managed to best the rest of their 
sisters, as if it were child's play.  They were determined to get vengence 
on this man whom would dare to cross the path of the Amazons.  Ling-Ling 
positioned her spear in his direction and began to speak.

"Why you come and do this?"

"I gave your sisters a fighting chance, I intend on giving you two the very 
same one.  Tell me where Shampoo is and I will not harm you."

"We not tell you where Big Sister Shampoo is.  We beat you to keep Amazon 
honor intact."

"Have it your way, but let me warn you- -I will get to her and I'm willing 
to do anything to do it."

"Shut mouth and fight!"

The two girls joined back to back and began to do their "Dragon Special 
Attack."  The young man stood silently as he watched them, all the time not 
giving the slightest presence of his skill.

The sound of music began to fill the air as the two had completed their 
tatic.  The stranger simply smiled as he began to sway side to side to the 
music.  With him now caught in the power of the attack, they began to charge 
in with the dragon and deliver a blow to end the battle.  The stranger 
continued to watch them as they sped forward.  He continued to dance to the 
beat of the music.  Just as Ling-Ling was about to reach him he flipped to 
the side and the back to his original position as Lum-Lum was approaching.  
She was startled by his move, which accounts for her not preparing for the 
leg sweep which he pulled under her.  The young man, went into a hand stand 
and caught Lum-Lum by the throat in a leg scissor as she fell.  He then 
looked toward Ling-Ling.

"ENOUGH!!!  Nice try, with your musical attack.  However, my fighting style 
is Capoeria.  Causing me to dance only focuses my abilities.  Now tell me 
where I can find Shampoo now, or your sister will pay for your inability to 
speak."

Lum-Lum tried to call out and tell her sister not to, but the stranger 
tightened his legs around her throat. She could only fight for enough air to 
stay alive.  Ling-Ling took a step forward, but the stranger once again 
tighten his grip causing Lum-Lum's body to start to go limp.  She bit down 
her anger and pride as she began to speak.

"Release Lum-Lum.  Shampoo in Japan, that all I tell you."

"Japan?  She is a long way from home, but I will find her."

"I tell you where she is, now release sister!"

"Yes, I will keep my word."

The stranger kicked Lum-Lum off into the air, he then jumped up after her.  
As they both began to fall back down to the ground, he delivered a 
lightening fast kick to the lower back portion of Lum-Lum's head.  He landed 
on the ground with her in his arms.  She was not moving.  He placed her 
lifeless body on the ground and looked back at Ling-Ling.  She was horrified 
by the site that she had just seen.  Then she was possesed by a blind fury 
that swept over her as she saw the man begin to smile.

"You....  You...  MURDER!!!  I kill you!"

"She isn't dead, I don't kill girls.  Especially little weak ones.  I just 
put her to sleep.  I can't have you two warning Shampoo that I'm coming.  
Seeing that I still have to find her in Japan.  This only makes things fair 
for me."

Ling-Ling ran at her attacker at full speed.  She swung her spear wildly, as 
she attempted to get vengeous for her fallen sisters.  The young man dogde 
each attack in a some what rythmic mannar.  He looked as if he was playing 
with her, as he danced around her assault.  She leaned in further with her 
spear and took another swing at his head.  He ducked it and rolled behind 
her.  Just as she pulled her spear back she began to topple over, due to the 
attack he had just made.  It was the same kind of kick he applied to the 
back of her sister's head.  He caught her before she hit the ground, and 
propped her up against her sister's body.

"There...  You'll be out for a while, and when you wake up.  You won't even 
remember I was here.  Shampoo, I am comming for you.  And this time I will 
not let anything stand between us."

He got up and began to walk off.  As he did he began to think about Shampoo. 
  An image of the girl he once new flashed before him.  Then he began to 
think to himself.  {Shampoo, you told me that we would be together forever.  
It was a promise that you didn't keep, but when I find you I will settle the 
score.}


{To be continued.....}

Who is this attacker?  What does he want with Shampoo? What is this fighting 
style.  Why am I asking these questions?

You're just going to have to wait and see.   Nan... :)
And I like asking annoying question.  So there's the answer to the last 
question.


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