Subject: Re: [FFML][Fanfic][Ranma] Crossed Wires (Chapter 10)
From: Kent Hyam
Date: 5/22/1999, 1:31 AM
To: Gary Kleppe
CC: "ffml@fanfic.com" <ffml@fanfic.com>
Reply-to:
rodney.hyam@sk.sympatico.ca

I'm a bit late replying to this, but I've been busy.

Gary Kleppe wrote:

Some very funny moments in this one. I would've liked to see a bit more
with Ukyo affected by Shampoo's powder.


I'll keep this in mind if I ever get around to doing a  rewrite.  If it
happens it will be after I finish the sequel.

The resolution of the Nodoka crisis was a bit disappointing. Seems to me
that it was ended in a serious way (by having Smart Kasumi step in and
explain everything to Nodoka) when a humorous resolution would've been
more appropriate and satisfying.


I agree.  I just couldn't think of one.  I also think that Kasumi wound up a
bit too perfect, solving problems instead  of ignoring them.  Her engament
to Ranma will cause a few problems though.

All in all, I enjoyed reading the series.


Thanks.

Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html

  Kent Hyam