You'll probably want to change Rama's forehead mark. I was sure you'd
realise that an upright infinity symbol is an '8'. Which doesn't look very
nice on anyone's forehead- least of all a goddess.
Belldandy doesn't use 'oneesama'. Only Skuld uses that to refer to Bell.
The 'recharge method' is aplicable only when Yddgrasil is down.
Why didn't Ranma just jump when they asked her to move?
Finally, beware if your fic starts being similar to that atrocious 'Lesbian
1/2'. Because it looks like it's headed there....