| Subject: Re: [FFML][Fanfic][Ranma] Crossed Wires (Chapter 10) |
| From: kleppe@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe) |
| Date: 5/20/1999, 5:06 PM |
| To: "ffml@fanfic.com" <ffml@fanfic.com> |
Some very funny moments in this one. I would've liked to see a bit more with Ukyo affected by Shampoo's powder. The resolution of the Nodoka crisis was a bit disappointing. Seems to me that it was ended in a serious way (by having Smart Kasumi step in and explain everything to Nodoka) when a humorous resolution would've been more appropriate and satisfying. All in all, I enjoyed reading the series. Gary Kleppe http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html