Subject: Re: [FFML][Fanfic][Ranma] Crossed Wires (Chapter 10)
From: kleppe@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe)
Date: 5/20/1999, 5:06 PM
To: "ffml@fanfic.com" <ffml@fanfic.com>

Some very funny moments in this one. I would've liked to see a bit more
with Ukyo affected by Shampoo's powder.

The resolution of the Nodoka crisis was a bit disappointing. Seems to me
that it was ended in a serious way (by having Smart Kasumi step in and
explain everything to Nodoka) when a humorous resolution would've been
more appropriate and satisfying.

All in all, I enjoyed reading the series.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html