On Wed, 19 May 1999, David Johnston wrote:

Subject: 
        [FFML] [Ranma/WOT] Parallel Lives 13 

Comments:  A number of different people have had the same idea of
transporting Ranma and other cast members into this series.  This
is probably the most successful one.  There's a distinct feeling of
geographic confusion though as the story switches from Shampoo and 
Kaneda to Alyssa "twenty feet down the corridor".  The geographic 
switches seem to me to be too common and therefore confusing.

Righto. I'll work on it. Thanks.

I've been thinking of splitting this episode into two shorter ones, one
for each of the two major areas where stuff is happening, but since the
events are simultaneous, I did it this way.  Now, I'll have to reconsider
if it's confusing.

 

John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas         
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