I must admit that I don't really get it. 

Is this the whole story or merely a snippet of one. As it stands now, it is so
disjointed and confusing that I don't see the point.

The title, "Magic Soul", barely has any meaning that I can discern (except that
maybe his soul did something funky to the spell.

And the ending was totally non-sensicle. What's it about. 

NEED INPUT!!!

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 / Here lies:\  First Corollary of Taber's Second Law:
|   Andrew    |    Machines that piss people off get murdered.
|             | 
|   I think   |       
| he's hungry | Honk Louder! I don't have a firing solution yet!
|             |