I forgot to mention this and it may already be an implicit facet of the
FFML, but any and all C&C would be greatly appreciated. Everyone has
been very supportive and I am willing to go to great lengths in order to
improve my technique and simply tell a good story. Therefore I will
respond to any and all questions or comments provided that they are
salient.

Thank you


-Prince Frog - Proponent of the non-aligned FFML Canon War Treaty of
1999.