Well, Lou wanted to see what the reaction to the fourth edition version
would be.  You may find it a bit big to run through the grammar,
but if you'd like to point out anything, go ahead.  I don't personally
care if we get any C&C out of it, but this is just to show some
folks what we were working on.

We're up to seventh revision now, which includes Episodes
1 through 14 (something like twelve chapters in the first
book and thirty-four chapters in the second for Act I).  
We've also started planning out Act II and Act IV.

Enjoy...

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