Hello all once more to the stage of my own creation, my mind. Now, this is my original piece of fiction that I did while for my English Class back in College. I did 2 short stories of this, one at the beginning of the saga and the other one at the end. As you may know, this is the first part that I call The Party and and is going to be rewritten in my own way again. You may call it a rough draft or finish ed product but I only know for sure. So, without further ado, here it is. Enjoy!
Sincerely,
Jorge Antonio Rivera Escobar
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C&C is always welcomed, also with SEELE or Angel attacks.I'll get my AT field ready just in case.^_^
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Starlight Entertainment
Presents
An original Story by Jorge A. Rivera
(c)1999 Starlight Entertainment
Future Destiny:
The Party
It was a warm sunny day, the warm breeze flowing through the park, stirring ocassionally the leaves and branches of the trees. She walked alowly, her long black hair flowing side to side, her heart shaped face filling slowly with a happiness she slowly endeavored. She wore a yellow blouse and a rose pattern skirt. She wore high heeled sandals, her feet slowly walking slowly in against the concrete. She wore yellow ribboin atope her head, her deep brown eyes filled with a ray of hope and anticipation. Somehow, she knew today was the day that she felt a wonderful feeling slowly creeping up inside her. Her lips were full lipstick, deepp red, giving it a lusciuos look. She kept on walking, past the oak trees, towards a house that was slowly coming alive.
She stepped up to the stairs, a little bit of hesistation she felt in her heart. Outside, she heard the music coming from the speakers, the tropical feeling of being back home. She slowly walked up towards the door and knocked loudly. Inside, a young man sat in the couch, wincing at his watch and a worried look on his face crept up on him. <Dang it, where is she?> He thought, and was relieved when he heard the doorbell chime. He got up, smiling at last, and felt his heart filled with a joy that he never knew he had. He opened the door and was awe-struck by the beauty that was in front of him. She was an angel to him, and always was, despite that they only knew each other for the past few months at school.
"Hi, Anthony, how you doing?" She smiled and bowed, looking a little bit uncomfortable and nervous at the same time.
" Hi, Tifa, I was getting a little worried that you weren't going to show up. " He looked at her and gave her a kiss on the cheek, very slowly, letting his cologne penetrate her.
Tifa gave a deep blush and she shook it off, until his cologne penetrated it her. Her japanese features were amazingly beautiful, despite that Anthony was latino and came from a different culture. He approached her one day at school, in the cafeteria during breakfast, and since she was new here, she felt alone. Anthony hanged out with his friends when he saw her. He was stunned by her beauty but at the same time, he was a little bit shy in dealing with the opposite sex. He was a loner too, and when he hanged around with his friends, he felt that he belonged but somewhow, that didn't last long. Inside his heart he felt the thing that he lost after many constant rejections, was his courage and he got up, walked towards her and sat down next to her smiling.
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