Hi, everyone!!!
    I just wanted to know if anyone has decided to read at least one of my portions of "Shizen."  If so, do you think that I should re-write all of it in present tense.  (I'm finding that writing in past tense is a challenge for me.)  Please, I really do need criticism -- be it something that I can fix with the spell checker or something that I should completely re-write.

   Ja!!!
     ~Utsu~
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  "When we are weary, we speak lovingly of dreams as if they embodied our true desires -- what we would have when that which we do have so sorely dissapoints us.  But for this wanderer, the concrete world has always been the true object of desire, and weariness only came when the world seemed dreamlike."

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