On Wed, 5 May 1999, Tom Mathews a.k.a. Disruptor wrote:

	Makoto drifted through the dimensioanl barrier.  He knew that he would be 

dimensional

	*I'm coming Ifurita,* Makoto thought as a warm smile crossed his face

coming, Ifurita,
 

	"I'm no dream Ifurita," Makoto said, "I'm here for you.  You're weak please 

dream, Ifurita,

	Nodding, Ifurita caused her staff to vanish.  After that was done, Makoto 
and Ifurita went to his house.  Makot found some clothes that would fit the 
Demon-god as well as a jacket.  The two lovers walked around the parks and 

Demon-goddess

beaches of the prefecture they were in.  They finally stopped and sat 

the entire prefecture?

	"Are you okay sister?" asked Setsuna

	Ifurita could only nod

nod.

	"We were based off of Selene's appearnce after all, Usagi," Setsuna 

appearance

replied, "Right now, I'm more concerend with my sisters crying."

concerned

	Usagi said, "It's natrual.  Your crying becuase you're happy and sad at the 

because

its healing power up.  She direcetd the energy at Ifurita, which as soon as 

directed

	"So, everything I went through was neccesarry to prevent an even worse evil 

necessary

	*I can trust my friends.  They've always been their for me*

been there

	The trio watched as Usagi's hair and skin slowly became grey and her eyes 
became red.  The voice that emmenated from Sailor Moon was oddly triple 
toned.

emanated

 

be destroyed," the possesed Sailor Moon said with a dry chuckle.

How can despair laugh?  Also, how can despair do anything if all it ever
feels is despair? :)

in as good as shape as the rest of the party.  Mr. Fujisawa saw Nanami's 
face and decided to give her a bit of a break.  He took the projecto and 

projector

handed it to Miz, while he slung Nanami over his shoulder like a sack of 
potatoes.  Miz and Mr. Fujisawa quickly caught up to the two girls and 
joined the run.

heh.
 

	"Sensei," Nanami said, "Traveling like this is not confortable."

This is a little too formal.  She probably should just say, "This HURTS!"
or something similar.
 

	Shayla got a wicked grin on her face, "I see.  You take Nanami and the 
staff why we have some fun with the bugs and laughing boy."

while we have
 

	Nanami retreived the record module from Miz and allowed Makoto

retrieved

Kino to pick 
her up.  Sailor Jupiter used her Senshi abilites to lift into the air.  

It seems odd to switch between Mako's identities in adjacent sentences.

	As the temporaryy truce took hoold, the entire group headed towards the 

temporary

swirling energy.  All of them hoping that whatever this was, it would not 
destroy El Hazard.  Jinnai ordered his bugs out loud to carry the three 
humans, so they wouldn't be tired out by the time they reached the Eye.  
Shayla, Miz, and Mr. Fujisawa accepted the rides with a bit of reluctance, 
but knew it was the best thing to do.  The combined group said nothing as 
they raced to fight a new disaster.
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	Back on the Forbidden Island, the remaining Phantom Tribe members were 

divider should have blank lines before and after it.

holding a meeting.  A large male spoke to the assmbled group.

assembled

 

	The shadowy humanoids went to their vehicles and left the island to rejoin 
their god in spreading despair and hopelessness throught the dimensions.

throughout

	The ice boat that Mercury made to carry the stasis device was easily eating 
up the distnace due to the thrust of the hoverboat attached to the top of 

distance

	"Usagi...it looks like Usagi might be getting possesed by a n evil force."

by an 
 

	Haruka looked at her blue clad teammate in shock, "That's immposible.  She 

impossible

has been able to withstand so much, that I can't buy her being possesed."

posessed
 

and family without having to worry about the world.   Its been getting 

It's been

	Haruka said, "I think we'll shelve this discussion for now.  Right now, we 
have to go rescue Sailor Moon.  Afura, you have powers over the wind.  Can 
you ad some speed to our vessel?"

add
 

	 "Don't waist your time you metal homonculous.  She can't free

Don't waste your time, you metal

	"Search your soul Setsuna. You will find the answer.  Good-bye," Selene 

soul, Setsuna

	Setsuna looked back up at  Usagi and said, "Don't worry Usagi-chan.  I 
won't fail you," and under her breath she added, "This is the real reason I 
was built."

worry, Usagi-chan.


John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas         
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