Shade wrote:
But most of all.......
Ryoko wanted to RIP OUT GENMA SAOTOME�S BLACK
HEART AND FEED IT TO HIM!!! For the first time ever Ryoko,
who had slain hundreds against her will for a millennia wanted to
kill someone she hated with all her heart and soul. Not even Yosho
had inspired such a strong feeling in her, the red fires of rage raced
through her veins as the demon watched and swore to make that
*thing* beating the helpless child before her pay.....
Ranma finally slipped into unconsciousness once more.
No matter how long it took to escape.....
The beating finally stopped and the man picked his son
up and carried him off to arrange a little *accident* that
would explain away Ranma�s sudden injuries.
A sudden chill filled Genma�s spine but
was blamed on the cold mountain breeze.
A pair of deadly golden eyes fixed on
the retreating martial artist�s back
and the limp burden now slung over it.
She would make him pay.....
Interesting, I'll love to see how this develops.
(To be continued)
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(1) Genma wants to keep this little problem a secret. Ranma�s pretty
good at being able to cover his handicap so the Masaki�s don�t
really notice at first.....
It'll be interesting to see how they react to it, if you choose
to write out this particular scene. However I'm more interested to
see how Tenchi and Ranma grow up, and how Ryouko deals with them
once she's released.
Readers and listeners praise my books;
You swear they're worse then beginner's.
Who cares? I always plan my dinners
To please the diners, not the cooks.
This I like, and it pleases me to see it more than MY
words can say!
Good job!