On Tue, 4 May 1999, Eimii wrote:

	Quite, quite interesting. :)

Thanks! I was worried about that, since i don't think i have a very good
grasp of the plot of Eva...

	Now, that could be a problem. Be sure you know what's going on,
yes? :)

	I remembered the fic idea of switching the generations around, and
perhaps even saw the beginning of a fic written, but that was a little
while ago...

That was me ^_^. I posted the first third of this as a teaser about a
month back...

	Ah, okay....

	Especially how well Rei would fit into Gendou's role. The idea
never occurred to me until now. o.o Now, Touji _would_ make an excellent
hot-headed military man, eh? :)

Hehehe... things aren't always what they appear to be, but still, it's
good to know that the characterizations work. People are gonna start
wondering why i didn't make Kensuke the military man though...

	True, but I'm sure you've got that covered. :)

	If other things map out, I think I can see where Asuka's coming
in, though. :D Anyhow, just a couple of nits that I must pick....

<smirk> I didn't cast _everyone_ because of their personalities, but we'll
see...

	Hmm. o.o

colossal, green, vaguely ape-shaped... thing, that towered before her. 

	Green? I recall Sachiel being black and white, mostly.... Eh, but
it's a minor point. :)

I think he was green in the anime; sort of a really dark forest green. I'd
like to use the manga, since i like the manga's Shinji better, but it's
not nearly finished yet <sigh>...

	And not to be finished for a while, if at all. x.x Sadamoto!
Please come baaaack!

	<snip the rest>
	Quite an excellent piece of description, there. n.n

Thanks ^_^. I'm a firm believer that my dubious descriptive ability is the
only thing that keeps people from realizing that i'm a hack...

	Oi. Say no such things about yourself. o.o

April 16, 2029

	You are going to explain the later timeframe, yes? :)

Naah, i ain't gonna _tell_ you why, i'm gonna _show_ you...

	Fair enough. n.n

customer base, had complied; several of the more rugged gar lines now

							  ^^^
	Should be 'car', yes?

<whips out an axe and attacks computer> BAD spellchecker! _NAUGHTY_
spellchecker! <computer fizzles and dies> Oops...

	Iya. Dame desu. o.o

	I do wonder what the significance of 'finding her' is.... o.o

Hmmm... Maybe Shinji's just happy cause he doesn't have to put up with
Kensuke's rediculous expense reports for much longer ^_^...

	Eheheh.

A small frown formed on Rei's lips as the pickup in her ear caught the

	Hm, a frown is more of a full-face thing, rather than just a
person's lips....

Yeah, but you can't usually expect Rei to get it _exactly_ right, though
she tries really hard...

	Hm, okay. n.n

and continued to hold the handkerchief to his cheek. "Nuclear missile
defense system; orbital particle beam satellites. They're usually pointed

	O.o
	So, are there still N2s in this universe? :)

Yeah, though with fourteen extra years to work at it, you'd think they'd
come up with something more accurate...

	Good point.
	Will the EVA equipment be also more advanced, along this line,
then?

"Hey-yoo!" Popping her head out of the manhole, Eimii waved cheerily for a
second, before breaking into a fit of coughs as the cloying cloud of dust
and ash invaded her lungs.

	Eimii-san! n.n

<waves again sheepishly, scratching the bandages wrapped around her head>
Hi... Maybe i should have asked you how safe it was to write Eva fics
first, ne...?

	It's not. @.@

	Anyhow, as I said, quite an intriguing piece of work. Eagerly
awaiting more, of course. n.n Take care.

Thanks! I'll try to write some more pretty soon, but next week is finals,
so i'm not getting _anything_ done for now...

	Of course. Good luck!

Andrew Huang...Nerdboy@KawaiiMUCK, Hisame00 on AIM
http://www.hcs.harvard.edu/~alhuang/
Harvard Anime Society, President
"Mweh. Heh. Heh."