Well... not that folks haven't been weighing in on this story
already... I did so want to get my two yen in, so here goes...

There's been a real dearth of good, falling-down-funny
fanfiction lately (of course, having just recently been 
introduced to Evanjellydonut, perhaps it comes from 
looking in the wrong place; Kami knows there ain't much
NGE-based comic fics [although there OUGHT to be, since
so many folks are writing dark Ranma stuff - it's only fair])
so I really gotta put in a plug for this series.

Believe it or not, I missed the first three chapters... Zen
was kind enough to recommend and forward them to me,
and now I wanna return the favor by recommending 
this story to the FFML at large.  If ya haven't seen this 
story, sugar, you've gotta go back to the archive and
check it out.

Chapter four is every bit as witty as the previous three,
with Ran-chan and Akane-chan pulling off a practical
joke on all of Nerima (and no, I'm not telling.  Just read it,
okay?  ^_^ )  It probably could be argued that R&A are
a bit smarter than their canonical counterparts, but it's
a minor quibble.  It's funny enough to forgive that.

BTW, Kenjiko-kun... that crack about Amazon.com... 
one of those things that gets you wondering why no
one ever thought of that before.  And since it's bad 
form to laugh at your own jokes, I appreciate the fact
that you have everyone groan at it... even Kasumi.

Now I know I'm not one to talk, but I can hardly wait 
for the next installment of this tale... whaddya say?
I can even offer a few suggestions you might have 
overlooked...

1.)  And this is outta pure egotism... you've included
      all the other fiancees (and would-be fiancees), but
      where am I in all this?  Well, maybe that wouldn't
      help your story that much... I'm probably the least
      bothered by the curse, after all - hey, I think it's a hoot.

      Anyway, I should thank you for sending Tsu-baka
      into Lower Earth Orbit within the first page of your
      story.

2.)  Well, if *I'm* not all that interesting, what about the Master
      himself?  Ol' Happi's been trying for quite some time to
      get Ran-chan into a bra, and now he's missing out on 
      having his dreams and schemes come to fruition?  I think
      not.

      Come to think of it, does anyone have an idea of how 
      Nodoka-san and Happosai might relate to each other?
      Considering what Ms. Saotome considers manly, it would
      seem that she's embraced the true principles of Anything-
      Goes Martial Arts much more so than her husband the
      (alleged) disciple.

Anyway, just a coupla thoughts.  Will that keep your gears
turning for awhile, sugar?  Nice work.

Itsu mo,
Ucchan  ^_^

And to the rest of ya, did I remember to tell ya to "Read it!"?
Well... what're ya waiting for?  

UK  ^_~