Subject: [FFML] Re: The Clan pts. 10 & 11
From: "Bogue" <bogue@negia.net>
Date: 5/4/1999, 7:22 AM
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After several months of waiting we have some
new chapters of The Clan. This has proven to
be a very interesting series although there are
a few things that didn't make sense about these
chapters and the story on the whole. 1) What happened
to Ryouga? He was there the last chapter and then
*poof* he disappeared. I suspect you did this because
you did not want to do the confrontation that would occur
if he met Akane in these chapters. 
Akane:Hello Ryoug- Do I smell bacon?
Another thing that keeps bugging me is the lack of Cologne's
involvement in the story. Shampoo and Mousse I can understand
, but Cologne is smart enough to figure out what's going on
and try to contact Ranma about it. Unless of course she's not
doing anything for a reason. (Although I really can't see why) 
The Ranma and Akane fight was interesting, but it doesn't seem
right for Ranma take it this badly. The last scene where Ranma walked
into the Ucchan battered and bruised telling Ukyo that Akane did it gets
me to thinking we're going to be getting some BE type misunderstanding. 

Until I find better things to write about. Ja ne.