Subject: Re: [FFML][R1/2][Draft]{C&C}The Rose and the Worm, Ch. 4 part 1
From: David Homerick
Date: 5/2/1999, 6:27 PM
To: "David H. Siegel" <dhs28@columbia.edu>, FFML <ffml@fanfic.com>



"David H. Siegel" wrote:

David Homerick wrote:
I was hoping there'd be more, and here it is.
        I take Kuroneko up to my room.

Once again, excellent and sympathetic characterization of this version
of Kodachi. Funny Midorigame bit, and an interesting bit about family
dynamics among the Kunos. Only one nit: I seem to remember a suffix
after midorigame, but am unsure about whether it was -san or -chan. I
could, of course, be entirely wrong. 

I would assume it was -chan, unless Kotchi's crazier than I thought. 
Addressing one's pet with -san is pretty weird, unless the pet happens
to be named after one's late husband, in which case . . . in which case
it's actually still pretty weird. 



Can't wait for the remainder of this chapter.

Thanks.

"All tautologies are true."-David Kagan

-- David