Subject: Re:[FFML][R1/2][Draft]{C&C}The Rose and the Worm, Ch. 4 part 1
From: "David H. Siegel" <dhs28@columbia.edu>
Date: 5/1/1999, 12:47 PM
To: David Homerick
CC: FFML <ffml@fanfic.com>

David Homerick wrote:
I was hoping there'd be more, and here it is.
        I take Kuroneko up to my room.

Once again, excellent and sympathetic characterization of this version
of Kodachi. Funny Midorigame bit, and an interesting bit about family
dynamics among the Kunos. Only one nit: I seem to remember a suffix
after midorigame, but am unsure about whether it was -san or -chan. I
could, of course, be entirely wrong. Calling Ryouga-P Kuroneko is
appropriate, funny, and might give us a hint to future romantic dynamics
in this version of the Ranmaverse.

Can't wait for the remainder of this chapter.

-- David Siegel dhs28@columbia.edu <Webpage Coming Soonish> "All tautologies are true."-David Kagan