well.. I was expecting a little more of Ryouga in this chapter.. not 
just an intro, and ta-da.  And where was the challenge? Was the part 
about becoming as great as a gymnast like Kodachi, the challenge? I 
wasn't too clear on that.
Things I would have loved to know was whether or not Ryouga would 
become interested in Akane or would just aknowledge her as a good 
friend, and nothing else. It's the little things!

It's a very cute fic, I liked it.  Though, this chapter kinda had the 
same format as the first one. 

I'll be expecting more!

Evil Kasumi 
*~"She's really a very sweet girl.  She's just a violent maniac!"~* 


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