Subject: [FFML] [Spamfic/Writer-request][SM/R.5][Dark] An original R.5/SM!!!
From: "Syithe Syithe" <ssyithe@hotmail.com>
Date: 4/30/1999, 12:54 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

How to explain this? Well basically it's a giant spammish type thing that 
I'm hopping somebody will pick up on and write a fic for. As far as I know 
it's a one of a kind, which is really too bad in my opinion. But, in any 
case on with the story... er... spam.


Altered Characters:
	 	Akane (Sailor Moon)
		Ukyo  (One of the scouts)
		Kuno  (Tuxedo Mask)
		Yuka  (One of the scouts)

	The rest of the scouts can be filled in by whoever, or left as originals. I 
don't know enough about SM to mess around with it. Note that Ranma remains 
the same. Yes, that's right. No additional powers or abilities, just good 
ol' Ranma.



Brief (and rough) Outline of the Plot:


	Act #1:

		School - Ranma and Akane sitting under a tree, relationship developing 
etc.

		Ukyo arrives with cat - Cat being Luna, saved from kids by Ukyo, 
recignised her as a scout and managed to convince her of her duty and the 
need to find sailor-moon. After re-affirming that Akane is REALLY 
Sailor-moon Ukyo and Luna leave.

		End of School - Ukyo and Luna manage to get a chance to talk with Akane. 
While explaining things both Ukyo and Luna fail to mention disguising aspect 
of transformation.

		<Introduction of 'bad guy' characters (Queen Beyrl, etc) and their goal>

		First Demon (or should that be daimion?) appears - This time the demon 
chooses to possesses Cologne, who is caught off guard and beaten. Demon 
proceeds to do something with the food that allows it to drain peoples 
energy...

		Shampoo catches Ranma - Uses some kind of excuse to get him to the 
resturant later in the day, Shampoo goes back to resturant. She sees drained 
girls, feels the evil from her grandmother, attempts to beat the demon and 
make it release her. Fight, Demon finds it has to actually try to defeat 
Shampoo, brutal battle, Shampoo is killed as Ranma walks through the door 
(decapitation, throat torn out, disembowled something painful and deadly)

		Akane, Ukyo, Luna head towards the evil - Both girls in their transformed 
states, Luna directing towards source of evil, arrive at resturant as Ranma 
picks up Shampoos body and screams in rage. Shocked at carnage, only watch 
as Ranma starts to fight demon. Fight difficult, Ranma eventully knocked 
away from demon and at Sailor Moon and transformed Ukyo's feet. Akane tries 
to help, Ranma tells the girl (who he doesn't reciginise) to back off, small 
argument in which Akane gets angry at Ranma 'pretending' not to know her and 
says who she is, the spell is broken, Ranma recignises her. By this time the 
Demon regenerated enough, attacks Ranma, Ranma goes on overload and kills 
demon-cologne with ki blast. He then stumbles over to the remains of Shampoo 
and gives her a final embrace, then passes out. As Akane and Ukyo leave 
(Ukyo carrying Ranma) Akane is confronted by Tuxedo Mask, some kinda line 
about her not needing her help this time but he'll be there always. Two look 
into each other's eyes, Akane feels attraction, he leaves, Akane berates 
herself for feeling that way about other guys. Mousse leaves Nerima, Ryoga 
marries Akari.


	<Time passes>

Misc. Scenes (in chronological order)-

		Ranma failing to injure new demon, is forced to concede and allow Akane to 
kill it. Unspoken and unseen ire towards Akane being more powerful then him, 
no thoughts about other Scout.

		Akane stalling a little more each day before knocking Kuno out, Ranma 
getting suspiscous

		Ranma nearly killed while attempting to help Akane and scouts defeat 
demon, Akane tells him not to fight anymore accidentially saying he's too 
weak. His response is only a glare which scares Akane. Their relationship 
stumbles a bit afterwards, but Ranma manages to make up for it

		Ranma feverishly practicing, yet still below Akane's level (when 
transformed of course). Ukyo watches with concern and tries to talk about it 
to various people (the cats, Akane, other scouts etc.) yet nobody 
understands why she's so worried, saying Ranma will get over it.

		Queen Beyrl observing Ranma

		Ranma talking to Ukyo (still unaware she is a scout), expressing his anger 
at being surpassed by somebody who hasn't sacrificed anything to achieve it. 
He doesn't name names, and tries to remain vauge, but Ukyo knows what he's 
talking about. She doesn't breech the subject with the others again however.

		Another fight, this time Ranma is rendered unconscious. Akane and Tuxedo 
Mask kiss for the first time, Ranma sees it but believes it only a 
nightmare.

		Ranma talks to Akane about his anger at her being more powerful, but says 
he still cares for her and doesn't want that to get in the way. He is still 
determined to become more powerful though. Akane feels gulity.

		Akane and Kuno looking at each other more and more. Akane feels a vauge 
attraction to Kuno which confuses her. Kuno becomes more thoughtful and 
halts the daily battle.

		Tuxedo Mask's identity revealed

		Ranma catches Akane kissing Kuno, goes beserk and nearly kills him until 
stopped by Ukyo.

		Ukyo spends more time with Ranma, the two becoming closer. Ranma takes her 
into his confidence several times after that.

		Kasumi looking on with worry as Ranma 'trains' himself harder then ever, 
then cares for him after he passes out (two full days of non-stop action in 
the dojo being the cause)

		Ranma tells Akane off, she leaves crying, Ranma finds he isn't remorseful 
for doing it.

		Ukyo (in scout form) tries to tell Ranma that Kuno and Akane are destined 
for each other, they can't help it. Ranma's only response is silence.

		Queen Beyrl offers Ranma magic, which he refuses. Instead he asks access 
to ancient tomes of unarmed combat. A pact is made, Ranma's mind is 
unaltered. Jadite decides Ranma might not be such a bad guy after all.

		Ranma missing for a month. Soun finds Akane and Kuno getting along 'well' 
and decides that if she loves Kuno, then one of the other girls should marry 
Ranma. Kasumi hesitantly accepts, though not because she wishes to marry 
Ranma.

		Ranma returns with a dark aura which is clearly felt by all, fear of cats 
apparently gone. He openly threatens Akane. Ukyo (non-scout form) attempts 
to speak to him, he opens up a little, once again warming to her. The two 
part on good terms. His only response to the new engagment was a sneer of 
disdain to Soun.

		Senshi (or however you spell it) arrive at another supposed Demon attack 
to find a figure in pure black chinese clothing calmly absorbing peoples 
energy by touching them. When attacked he retaliates and nearly kills one of 
the scouts. They are forced to retreat and after a bit more draining he 
leaves. The figure was Ranma with a disguise spell similar to Sailor Moon's 
on him.

		Ranma is identified as the new demon. Akane wants him kicked out of the 
house but Soun refuses, claming that she has caused Ranma enough anguish by 
leaving him for Kuno. Akane pleads her case to both her sisters, and is 
forced to prove she is Sailor Moon. Nabiki becomes skittish around Ranma 
while Kasumi merely becomes more sympathetic, much to the disgust of Akane 
and Nabiki.

		Ukyo (non-scout) speaks to Ranma again, saying how the new attacks on 
people are scaring her and she wishes that they would stop. Ranma replies 
that he'll always protect her and she has no need to worry. He also says 
that he's sure the attacks will slow down, though probably not completely 
stop.

		Beryl upset at Ranma for decreasing the attack rate. He offers some of his 
own energy as a replacment, which she hesitatingly accepts as that his would 
be the rough equivalent of an attack by any of the old demons.

		Ukyo and Ranma get along even better. Akane berates Ukyo, as do Kuno and 
the other scouts, while Ukyo insists that Ranma must be under some kind of 
mind control and he's getting better. She points out that for the last 
several weeks there have been no attacks.

		News of a powered up Saffron coming to Japan reaches Ranma. He stops 
vouluntering his energy because he believes he'll need it for the fight. He 
is forced to go 'hunting' again.

		Ukyo speaks to Ranma again about the attacks, using the 'They scare me' 
tatic. Ranma gives her a quick kiss and says he's sure they'll stop again 
soon.

		Ranma fights Saffron, then absorbs his power. This time the power goes 
directly into him however. Beryl is irratated, but cannot find fault as that 
Ranma is bringing her plans along nicely. Jadite gets somewhat jealous, but 
reminds himself that Ranma is a comrade in arms.

		Ranma holding Ukyo (scout form) by the throat, about to kill her. Akane 
finally screams to him in desperation that the scout he's about to kill is 
Ukyo. Ranma releases her in shock, then stares down at the figure. He 
ignores her pleas that it's not what he thinks and leaves with the final 
words "completely betrayed".

		Soun starts getting scared of Ranma because he now shows no emotions other 
then a cool, calculating gaze. Or in the case of Akane ,and now Ukyo, 
extreme hatred. Kuno (as tuxedo mask) decides he's had enough and tries to 
take Ranma on. He is only saved by the combined forces of the scouts, Pluto, 
and a visiting Ryoga. Akari's pig is killed during the attack, which results 
in an extreme change in personality. She becomes skittish and untrusting of 
all, including Ryoga.

		Ranma leaves the dojo voluntarily with Kasumi giving him a parting kiss, 
which goes unreturned. Ryoga confronts Ranma about what he's becoming. Ranma 
burns off both Ryoga's legs with ki blasts, yet leaves him alive.

		New attacks starting, now the people are completely drained and lay dead 
where Ranma leaves them. The police attempt to mobolize against him, and 
fail. Ranma leaves with energy.

		Scouts develop a plan.

		Ranma caught in an ancient forcefield acts as if he's been released from a 
spell. Feinging ignorance of anything happens he pleads to 'whoever they 
are' to let him go. After much debate (and against the judgement of the 
outer scouts, Pluto, and the cats) Ranma is released. Ukyo runs up to hug 
him. He embraces her, then kills her. He throws the lifeless body at Akane's 
feet and tells her that she betrayed him at the start of this and that she 
will suffer for it. Jadite arrives and destroys the artifact which can 
generate the shield. Helping Ranma walk, the two leave.

		Funeral for Ukyo. Kasumi last to leave, speaks to Ukyo (or the coffin 
rather) about Ranma. When she leaves there is a flash of black and a set of 
leather bracers lay on the coffin.

		<Time Passes>

Possible Ending:
		Akane and Ranma stand face to face in the front room of the Tendo home. 
Where they first met. Akane is powered up to full Sailor Moon strength 
(whatever that happens to be) and Ranma has been strengthed through killing 
Beryl. All the scouts are killed, either by their own hand, Ranma's, or 
Jadite's. The battle seems even until Jadite (who has changed his loyalty to 
Ranma) manages to wound Akane through a surprise attack. Akane mortally 
wounds Jadite in return, and is soon after killed by Ranma. Kasumi and 
Nabiki enter the room. Soun and Genma are nowhere to be found. Ranma turns 
and smiles at Kasumi. "It's over." Kasumi nods her head. "I'm so empty 
now... it's funny though. I didn't even notice you were inside her until 
this moment." Kasumi smiles sadly and walks to him, Nabiki is speechless. 
"<Some demon's name, possibly from OMG?>, Demoness of vengence, first class 
unlimited." Ranma quotes, watching as she moves closer to him. "Have you 
come to take me? Strange, I didn't belive I would feel the flames of hell 
for quite some time yet."  "Oh no Ranma. We have such better things for you. 
I have such better things for you." Kasumi's body moved forward and kissed 
Ranma full on the mouth. They each stood kissing and slowly a red haze 
shimmered around Kasumi's body, expanding until it covered Ranma. The red 
grew intensly bright and when it faded away Kasumi lay unconscious on the 
floor.


			Final Tidbits
	Obviously the above are just things that I had wanted to do and can be 
changed according to the author's wishes. I would have written this, however 
I know nearly nothing about Sailor Moon and as such decided it would not be 
a good idea for me to try and write the fanfic. (faqs and plot summaries 
just aren't enough to use as info for a fic) Well I hope somebody decides 
it's a good enough idea to give it a shot, and if you do and need a 
pre-reader or something just e-mail me and I'll be more then happy to help. 
Thanks for reading.

Scuse, the lousy grammer and typos. I need to get some sleep.

~Syithe
ssauthor@hotmail.com
http://members.xoom.com/Syithe__/archive.html


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