Man.  This is one nervewracking story.  That scene with 
Nabiki is especially likely to induce nightmares, I suspect.

Not much to say in the way of C&C other than that I continue
to be immensely impressed.  I've promised myself I'm going to
go back and read the whole thing start to finish once you get
done. 

So... is the next one the last chapter?  38 chapters to match
the original 38 volumes of the manga?  There would be a nice
sort of symmetry to that, if you can pull it off.  

Best of luck,
Grayson Towler
grayson@rigroup.net

http://www.rigroup.com/~grayson/relentless