Ranma's holding back.

	Ranma's holding back *a lot*.

	This is the only explanation I can come up with for how someone who, two
months prior to the fic, was flying through the air by virtue of a
whirlwind of his own creation and blowing the tops off mountains was beaten
so easily. Of course, the fact that Ranma is inside an occupied apartment
building, and only scant feet from where his mother and the Tendo sisters
are would justify some of this. 

	There's also the question of the power level of the Ravener. Are all these
things hunted down by vampire demon hunters? Because as powerful as you've
got this thing, they should be crawling all over the place because no human
can stop them. Unless there are a *lot* more vampires in this world than
one'd normally expect, there has *got* to be a way for humans to handle
them to keep the Raveners in line. Otherwise, I can easily see them
exploding into the human world unchecked.

	One other thing, when the Ravener goes past Ranma and enters the room
where Nodoka and Kasumi are waiting, Ranma seems strangely emotionless
about it. Is he that confident that those two can defend themselves? There
doesn't seem to be anything in the fic so far to justify this stance.
Otherwise, I'd think he'd at least yell or something.

	After all this critizism, I should mention that I do like the fic, else I
wouldn't have bothered commenting about it. Please keep posting.

Scott

(Who didn't even mention his pet peeve against the Kachuu Tenshin
Amiguriken being a training exercise, not a rather lame-ass attack! Er...
oops!)


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Scott Pollert [pollerts@hsonline.net]