Now, *this* is the kind of surprise that I *like* to see pop up in my
mailbox. :)

Yes, given how long it took to put out the previous two chapters,
I expect it was a bit of a surprise.  I'm hoping to maintain a once-a-
month pace and not receive a Zen award for procrastination.

I don't have much to say in the way of productive C&C here. This was a
bit talky and thicker with explanations than the other chapters, but
still a really good read. Hope you can keep it up.

Yeah, the martial arts exposition came out a little heavy this time 
around.  It was a choice of either getting it all out of the way in this
chapter or spreading it out over the next, and I've got a LOT of ground
to cover in Chapter 9.  Hope it didn't bog it down too much.

Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html

Thanks for your comments, as always!


Grayson Towler
grayson@rigroup.net

http://www.rigroup.com/~grayson/relentless