After my prereaders have come back with a wealth of information, I realized 
that it was probably going to take me a bit to incorporate all of their 
corrections and suggestions into the text of the story.

In the meantime, I felt kinda bad that I had promised a post, and was 
letting it languish so long. So, starting tonight, I'm going to go ahead 
and post draft chapters.

These are *not* final products. They probably will change dramatically by 
the next post. I still welcome all comments on them. Anything that helps me 
tell the story is good in my opinion.

Now, on to chapter one!

Chris
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Chris Jones - guilty@arn.net
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It's 1999. Do you know what your children are?