Mechanics good:  spelling, grammar, formatting, etc.

You conveyed Akane's and Ranma's feelings effectively, at
a point fairly early in the story.  (IMO, Ranma and Akane
are not oblivious to each other's feelings later on, as
is sometimes portrayed.  For instance, Akane expects, and
relies on, Ranma to rescue her.  They hold hands coming
home from Ryugenzawa; Akane hugs Ranma on his return from
the adventure with Herb.  Their problem is more one of
pride, and that each reacts to insult from the other by
returning it.)

The main problem with this story, IMO, is that this material
has been gone over so many times that I found it difficult
to summon interest in yet another treatment, especially one
confined to WAFF.  It would have been more interesting
with some humor, or with a more original plot, or both.