This is my first "Aa! Megami-sama! fic. C&C would be greatly appreciated.
Flames will be tossed into the trash. I don't own any of these characters.
They are owned be Kosuke Fujishima, and companies representing him. If I did
own them, I'd be knee-deep in cash.

     Keiichi's life had settled into normality (or what could pass for it).
Of course, this meant that something was bound to happen soon. Maybe Mara
would pay a visit. Maybe Urd would try to "improve" something. But then
again, maybe things might actually stay "normal" for once and his
relationship with Belldandy could advance. He thought about it.

"Not likely."

     Keiichi sighed. Who would have thought peace could be so boring?
Belldandy was out shopping. Urd was showing some new goddess the ropes.
Skuld had attended some convention. He was just sitting on the floor,
thinking about what he could be doing. Keiichi had now just resigned himself
to simply looking at a spare wheel that was left over from a bike design
gather dust.

     "Boring. Boring! BORING!" Keiichi's mind screamed out. By now, the
wheel had so much dust it looked white. Bright white. In fact, it seemed to
be glowing. He quickly checked again. White pattern confirmed. It was going
to be a goddess.

     Panicked, he got up and backed off quickly. A young woman pulled
herself out of the wheel. The look she had as she came out completely
screamed newbie. This new goddess had red triangles on her forehead, and
slightly orangish ones below her eyes. She had short brown hair, clothes
similar to Belldandy's uniform, and a somewhat mischievious smile. "Hi
Kei-chan!" she exclaimed, with great familiarity.

     Keiichi thought quickly. Kei-chan? Only one person called him that.
That was... "Oh no" he thought, "this can't be real." He reacted
instinctively.

"MEGUMI!!!!!??????????"

Aa! Megumi-sama! Coming soon.

Someone give me some pointers on creating detail and writing dialogue. Some
info on their characterization would be appreciated too.