A couple of comments.
1) You are obviously on some sort of medication right?
2) Sometimes, you need some character chemistry to pull a fic through. I just
have a realllly big doubt that Kuno, Kodachi, Asuza & Ryouga would be the right
mix.
3) I couldn't quite follow a thing you were writing. In general, folks, avoid
using capital letter for any long section of writing. It gets really iritating
after a while. It also make it hard to see any plot whatsoever in this fic.
4) Can you cut down on the amount of author's notes you spit out? It was longer
than the fic itself.
5) Was there a plot in this fic? I must have missed it.
6) Overall, this was a very lousy fic. I strongly suggest you rework it
vigorously. And calm down, for pete's sakes! My suggestions:
	* Start the story as everyone is waking up from statis. Have the
          computer tell what happened, and let the story go from there.
        * If you are going to use Kuno, Kodachi, Asuza, & Ryouga I suggest
          having Kuno and Kodachi snipe at each other and Asuza chase after
          Ryouga. It fits their characters better.
        * Finally, how about using Kasumi instead of Ivi for your computer
          generated friend?
What you do from here I don't care, but it will be a better start than this fic
is. I will say that I am glad you are using other characters than the usual Tom,
Dick and Ranma.
---Andrew